post art in the park

for my first public event I'm happy on how it turned out. 

I'm now reworking on a painting I did in a beginning painting class. Here's what it looked like before...

For this project I looked at the work of Wayne White...

And this is what I have so far...

first drawing my text with pastel

then with painting

I'm keen with the way A looks with the incoherent solid white and pink. I don't know if I want to have Хрустальный with the same colors or if I should keep the transulcent box look. Tell me what you think. And if you don't know what the painting is saying get a Russian to English dictionary!